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FRACTAL ECONOMIES
Some recent poetry books
language is, John Phillips (Sardine
Press, $10)
One Day And How It Was,
Theodore Enslin (Granite Press)
Interrogation Palace. New and Selected Poems 1982-2004, David Wojahn
(University
of Pittsburgh, $14)
The Pitch, Tom Thompson (Alice
James, $14 )
A Little White Shadow, Mary
Ruefle (Wave Books, $12)
Fractal Economies, Derek
Beaulieu (Talon, $13.95)
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John Phillips' beautiful little book language is contains a set of superb philosophical and
imagistic poems which remind me of Robert Creeley's work (though some of my
friends have said Cid Corman is nearer the mark). I'll stick to Creeley
because the poems seem to me to engage with the idea of thought as it
happens, making poetry of the moment, aware of both that making and of the
moment.
Sitting
down
to think
what is
I am
here to
be
thought
by.
says one untitled piece (in its entirety). Another gets to the absolute heart
of the matter:
the time
it takes
to read
a poem
is it
Fantastic! Here is someone entranced by, and with, the fact that language is
how we engage with the world, and delighting in the possibilities that that
engagement offers. Here is someone making very personal yet universal work.
It isn't, by the way, all poetry about poetry, there's plenty of imagistic
and observational writing here too.
John Phillips runs Granite Press in St Ives and produces exquisite hand-sewn
editions. Thedore Enslin's recent pamphlet One Day And How It Was continues to explore the lyrical sequence which he
has specialised in for many years. The twelve short sections gradually
accumulate and react with & against each other, boldly stating halfway
through that 'There is a magic in this world'. Enslin's work reminds me of
the music of Philip Glass or Steve Reich (as well as the poetry of John
Taggart), a comparison perhaps reinforced by the last section's declaration
that
It is never
finished
what it does
not begin
the ends are
only timing
and there is
no time
It may be 'only' timing, but what timing! Enslin and Granite Press deserve to
be better known.
A different kind of music features in David Wojahn's Interrogation
Palace. In 'Mystery Train (A Sequence)',
which is my favourite section of this chunky book, music is a springboard for
narrative, social comment, fiction and digression. In the selections
reprinted here The Sex Pistols rub shoulders with Elvis Presley, who is
featured in a painting, as Janis Joplin boards the train of the sequence
title, and Bob Dylan visits Woody Guthrie in hospital, causing the nurse to
grit her teeth as he sings. Whether apocyrphal or based on true stories, it's
an intriguing sequence, which ends with the bizarre image of John Lennon
endlessly getting shot in a waxworks museum tableau.
This particular series is unusual for Wojahn: although he often starts poems
with, or at least includes, well-known images and events, the poems tend to
circle back to the personal and experiental. They, thankfully, manage to
avoid narrative and overblown epiphany, although the moment is often explored, and how that affects the
narrator and those around them, often in a dry philosophical way, which occasionally
is too mannered for my taste. There are a few more experimental poems in the
collection, usually consisting of spread out phrases and lines, with
asterixes between them; occasionally annotated in the margins. Presumably the
authors wants us to focus on these individual lines, but since they more
often than not flow from the last and on to the next it is difficult to see
why. Elsewhere in the section of new poems, there is outspoken political
comment on USA warmongering and Bush, which is good to read but will, I
suspect, date; a superb poem about Blind Willie Johnson; and an excellent
short piece about playing scrabble at an airport. Wojahn is a new name to me,
but I'm pleased to have made the acquaintance of his work.
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Tom Thompson's The Pitch is not to do with musical pitch, but territorial, or defined space
(as in pitching tents, or 'my pitch'). The poems are more abstract and play
with syntax and juxtaposition in an intriguing manner, although you
occasionally get clunkers of lines like 'The police set about their work so
tenderly! Like dolls built to simulate laughter.' ('A Fillip. A Fandango.')
As an opening line this makes me want to turn the page very quickly, but most of the work is much more developed and imagistically
and linguistically exciting:
Sheets of
copper and tin coated in a powedery glow. Roof gardens
blown open
stem by stuffed-musket-stem below.
The daymoon
plumps like melon. Even furniture
falls to its
knees in this eclipse. Stretched forth, prostrate to shadow.
('After Cheese and Coffee')
Clatter in
the hall announces me here at your stranger door. [...]
('Esprit d'Escalier [My Observers]')
The end is
something none expect in any material sense, but it
came
yesterday. Some contained trace of it on the floor of my
apartment:
small, wite, warm but hard at the denter where you'd
expect it to
be soft. [...]
('The End Is Something None Expect')
I warm to this kind of things being made strange, and to the urban disarray
(or 'mirrory city') the narrator of most of these poems inhabits and conducts
his relationships in. Several poems are facetiously amusing, such as
'Doctored Emerson' which starts with 'Doctor, I'm a clever girl. Could you be
my calling?'; others such as 'The Goods' use a more exploded form that makes
the reader focus on individual phrases (in a much more succesful manner than
Wojahn's previously mentioned poems):
[...]
Let room
equal everything not wall, it rings
with formless
yet distinct harmonies: traveler's clock
sugary
girders listing
within concrete ideas,
street
sweepers grinding up silence. Sounds flatten
the city
below to a meadow of seepage, [...]
This book interests me because of startling lines ('Here you are my nail-thnk
boy, all angular fidgets beneath the big red car') not because of the overall
success of the poems. If Thompson can get the poems even more consistent and
sustained, the work will be even better. As it is, the pitch is uneven and
intriguing.
Mary Ruefle's A Little White Shadow is a beautiful book of found poems. The poet has Tippexed out most
of each page of an old book of the same name to find short, often surreal,
poems. The original is reprinted in exquisite facsimile. It reminds me of Tom
Phillips' A Humument, but this
set of texts is less adorned - and all the better for that. If phrases such
as 'It / was my duty to keep / the / piano / filled with roses' or 'he /
quickly / spoke fluently in many languages / a human humming bird' make you
smile (and they do me) then you'll enjoy the fleeting pleasures - tactile,
visual and literary - of this neat little book.
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Derek Beaulieu's Fractal Economies moves even further into visual territory, Here are
collage poems, concrete poems made from badly-applied Letraset (remember
Letraset?), diagrams, photocopies, and prints. I want to like it more than I
do, but I factually ind this work incredibly difficult to come to as 'poetry'
- I'd rather consider it as 'art'. Also, I think that this kind of working
practice has been extended and furthered by others far more than Beaulieu
seems to be aware of. [Although being one of the editors of the shift
& switch anthology I recently
reviewed here should have helped.]
Visually, I find some of the work plain naff - I'm particularly unconvinced
by the Letraset pieces and the collages. Elsewhere there are some interesting
images made from rubbings of plastic letters of some sort and grids of
printed marks made, at a guess, by scrunched up paper or plastic. These are
my favourites, although I still feel the author/artist hasn't discovered or
created his own vocabulary yet. They're simply too coy, too ordinary, too
simplistic, to hold my attention. It seems it's the usual problem of makers
in one genre not knowing what is going on in other genres. Importing some
basic drawing and printmaking processes into visual poetry just isn't good
enough for me.
© Rupert Loydell 2006
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